Sample 23:    Negative Announcement

    BANK OF THE AMERICAS  
5 Timber Lane     ·     Woodbridge, CT 06525 


Voice:   203-555-3212     ·     Fax: 203-555-3210  
     
December 20, 20xx
     
     
    Ms. Janice Steiner  
1401 Foucher Lane  
Woodbridge, CT 06525 
     
    Dear Ms. Steiner:
When the fact that you are writing makes it obvious that the news is bad, get to the point quickly.  
Account #:        3742 Due Date:      September 30, 20xx
Amount Due:   $23,976.54 Late Charges:   $1,298.56

Be as positive as possible, and offer whatever help you can.   Although your payment is overdue, your previous record indicates a sincere desire to keep your account up to date. We assume that something has happened that makes it difficult for you to pay at this time. We'd like to help.

Solving money problems, whatever they might be, is our business. If you do have a problem, chances are that it will be easier than you think to find a solution. We would like to help you protect your credit standing.

     
Be specific about the reader's options.   So, please bring your account up to date or let us hear from you soon.
    Sincerely,
         

  

    Adrian Everts, Manager

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