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SCHOOL AND SOCIETY
ES 3950


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Research-Based Essay #2: "Commericalism & Schools."

In a FOUR PAGE RESEARCH-BASED ESSAY, you are to formulate a presuasive response to the forthcoming prompt.

Among other things, overall presentation, thesis, depth, support, and organization , will be considered during assessment. The paper is to be typed/word processed, double-spaced, 12 pt font. You may use you book/notes, and you do not have to hand in a rough draft. Again, support is key. Make sure to use examples from experience, the readings, and or material found in "Resources" websites.

Also, make sure you understand that although you may find yourself using "I" occasionally in your paper, this should not turn into a narrative, journal-type response. This should be a research-based persuasive piece, a formal piece of writing that relies on good organization, logic, and scholarly support and/or example. So organize and present accordingly.

Also, you are to assume that your audience is an educated audience, one with some familiarity with issues surrounding the topic.

QUESTION #2:

In Chapter Six of American Education, Joel Spring challenges readers to consider the growing relationship between commercialization and public schools.

For this essay you are to consider issues Spring raises and craft a persuasive essay addresses the following question: "Is Commericalism Good for Public Schools? "

Drawing on Alex Molnar's essay, "Tracking Commercializing Activities in America's Schools," craft a FOUR PAGE written response that not only attempts to answer the question, but also serves as a response to Molnar's suggestion that "If advertising is, as I believe, the twenty-four hour a day, seven day a week, three hundred and sixty-five day a year curriculum of our culture then Americans young and old are being relentlessly mis-educated and, as a consequence, our society is correspondingly less democratic" (Molnar).

Before and as you write, consider some of the following questions: Should advertisers be allowed to come into public schools? What good does such a relationship do for kids? For schools? What are examples of advertisers in schools? Is this a win or lose relationship?

Your paper will be evaluated on the basis of the following criteria:

  • To what extent is the paper clearly written, well-organized & cohesively focused on a central topic? A well-written paper will have a central argument or purpose, & will proceed in a logical and coherent way allowing the reader to follow the argument and make sense of it.
  • To what extent does the writer ground his/her argument in relevant course readings? The paper should provide examples & make connections to issues, ideas, etc. raised in the reading to support whether you agree or disagree with the question.
  • To what extent does the paper follow the conventions of spelling. Grammar & punctuation? The paper should exhibit careful proofreading before being submitted.
  • To what extent does the writer provide accurate & appropriate citations and references when necessary? When quoting source material, make sure to give page number and author, i.e. "Many immigrant groups are being forced to give up cultural norms to conform to Euro-centric modes of learning" (Spring, 172).

To remind, you are to draw on Molnar's work for this essay. In addition, you are expected to look for support/research from at least two other outside resources. With this type of writing, you are to support your points/work with resources from coursepack and/or outside research.

Without scholarly support, the paper's grade will greatly be affected.

In the end, make sure you have a clearly defined thesis, and when writing make sure you use examples to support your assertion – you MUST make connections to issues, ideas, etc. raised in the reading to support whether you agree or disagree with the question.

Persuasive by nature, your paper will be evaluated on the basis of the following criteria:

  • To what extent is the paper clearly written, well-organized & cohesively focused on a central topic? A well-written paper will have a central argument or purpose, & will proceed in a logical and coherent way allowing the reader to follow the argument and make sense of it.
  • To what extent does the writer ground his/her argument in relevant course readings? The paper should provide examples & make connections to issues, ideas, etc. raised in the reading/classroom to support your assertion.
  • To what extent does the paper follow the conventions of spelling. Grammar & punctuation? The paper should exhibit careful proofreading before being submitted.
  • To what extent does the writer provide accurate & appropriate citations and references when necessary? When quoting source material, make sure to give page number and author, i.e. "Homeless people continue to be marginalized by society" (Smith 172). For a paper of this length, consider at LEAST THREE RESOURCES/CITATIONS FROM READINGS/RESOURCES.

If you need to have an idea of "length," I expect each paper to be UP TO FOUR FULL PAGES, typed/word-processed, double-spaced, and at least THREE outside sources (M.L.A., please). You must also have a "Works Cited" page. Without proper citation, your grade can be affected (i.e. When you quote source material, make sure to give page number and author i.e. "This is known as ‘social reproduction'." (Spring 89)).

THERE IS NO MAKE-UP FOR THIS ASSIGNMENT.


Research-Based Persuasive Paper Rubric

An "outstanding, excellent, extraordinary" paper worthy of an "A" would likely "look" something like this:

As a whole, the writing is extremely well written; the content flows without problem by being well organized; attention to categorization of ideas obvious; the writer exhibits a sophisticated control of language, diction, voice/tone; the writing is exceptionally engaging, clear, and focused / The writer clearly illustrates critical thinking about the topic/issue by using relevant facts and information; the main ideas/opinions are stated clearly and is convincing; supporting information is abundant; appropriate and main ideas are accurate; as a whole, the writing is logical/rational; and, the writer makes specific references to source material and/or examples / Attention to presentation obvious, little to no problems at all with mechanics or grammar and conventions contribute to the effect of the presentation.

A "very good/high pass" grade of "B" means that the writer might meet the requirements, but still lacks in some of the more critical areas reflective of "A" quality work; an "adequate/satisfactory" paper receiving a "C" likely meets some of the criteria/requirements, but leaves too many questions regarding planning, content, approach, etc.; a "D" grade likely reflects considerable problems and/or poor quality of work, support, organization, planning, etc; an "E" reflects severe problems with the assignment.

For a more detailed rubric on the asssignment, click here.

For some additional help and/or to review the criteria when it comes to persuasive essays/writing, click here , here, or here.

 


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